Response

Welcome to the second Haiku Circus prompt, “response“. The first prompt was a great success with over 100 replies! Feel free to respond with any haiku based on either the prompt, a contributed haiku or responses to these selected haiku. Any suggestions on how to make this site better are appreciated!

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One of a Class

From alicekeysmd:

sun calls seed by name
there can be just one response

green reaches upward

on bended knee he
awaited her slow response

you must be crazy

From readinpleasure:

garbed in flowing robes
sweating choir chants all night long
responsorial psalm

From oneofaclass:

no response
despite many prompts
he plays dead

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71 thoughts on “Response

  1. readinpleasure

    you must be crazy
    to give me that crooked ring
    sad Valentine day

    green reaches upwards
    piercing the sky with all hues
    I see the rainbow

    he plays dead
    to all my loud hints
    this dead love

    Reply
    1. oneofaclass Post author

      sad Valentine day
      gave me a vacuum cleaner
      his gift from the heart

      I see the rainbow
      then followed to its end
      no pot of gold there

      this dead love
      from happiness to
      suffering

      Reply
        1. Alice Keys

          my ex and my friend
          a drunk and a gambling man
          deserve each other

          (hope I kept people straight here ;-))

          my dying moments
          postponed as long as I can
          for heaven on earth

          Thanks for playing, Celestine.

          Reply
      1. Alice Keys

        once again
        dive from hope’s high cliff
        find my wings

        Very nice, Cheryl. I like the brevity of your poem. It transmits so much with so little. Good job. πŸ™‚ Alice

        Reply

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